New website material... - Honda-Tech

JakeB. · 08-27-2008, 10:23 PM

Local competition is starting to bring the heat, so we're in the process of creating a new website.
Since we're taking the effort to get a new design, it only makes sense to load it with updated material.

If you fine people don't mind, I'll post shots here as I get through them. I'd love for you to tell me what you think of each image.
I'll try to do a different wedding or engagement session each night.

Here are a couple shots from Shaun and Casey's wedding: the first one I like, but the second I'm on the fence about.

Thanks a bunch in advance

KOREAN · 08-27-2008, 10:54 PM

I really like the first image. Personally, the streak on the left slightly and momentarily took my focus away from the main subjects.

As for the second image, something just doesn't feel right to me. I'm thinking it's the bottom half of the image being so out of focus compared to the top half.

O3DigitalBath · 08-28-2008, 01:31 AM

i'm also really feeling the first one, second pic just isn't doing it for me, I don't think its processing is adding anything to it, more taking away if anything.

JakeB. · 08-28-2008, 05:11 AM

werd, thanks.

JakeB. · 08-28-2008, 07:51 PM

This is actually an older wedding, but I still like these images...

KOREAN · 08-29-2008, 09:57 AM

I like the first photo but I'm having a hard time putting my thoughts in words. All I can say is that the picture will surely bring them good memories

The second picture is my personal favorite out of the three you just posted. Although the subjects are (purposely) underexposed, I can really feel the sense of celebration. The sky looks like an oil painting and I like it. I'm not sure if that's my laptop, Photobucket or both, but it works for me.

This is probably just me but in the third photo my eyes like to shift towards the upper right hand corner, particularly near the woman's face. And if you want me to get picky, I think I see dust on the man's jacket.

JakeB. · 08-31-2008, 10:53 PM

Thanks for taking the time Korean... here are a few from Rosemarie & Larry's wedding.

Man, I really need to pick some ceremony shots, huh?

08-27-2008, 10:23 PM	#1
JakeB. Photography Pundit Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Bradenton, FL Posts: 4,265	New website material... Local competition is starting to bring the heat, so we're in the process of creating a new website. Since we're taking the effort to get a new design, it only makes sense to load it with updated material. If you fine people don't mind, I'll post shots here as I get through them. I'd love for you to tell me what you think of each image. I'll try to do a different wedding or engagement session each night. Here are a couple shots from Shaun and Casey's wedding: the first one I like, but the second I'm on the fence about. Thanks a bunch in advance __________________ JD Fine Art Phototgraphy My Flickr

08-27-2008, 10:54 PM	#2
KOREAN is hella epic Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 4,847	Re: New website material... (JakeB.) I really like the first image. Personally, the streak on the left slightly and momentarily took my focus away from the main subjects. As for the second image, something just doesn't feel right to me. I'm thinking it's the bottom half of the image being so out of focus compared to the top half. __________________ flickr

08-28-2008, 01:31 AM	#3
O3DigitalBath Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: orlando, fl, usa Posts: 783	i'm also really feeling the first one, second pic just isn't doing it for me, I don't think its processing is adding anything to it, more taking away if anything. __________________ 94 civic dx 89 240sx

08-28-2008, 05:11 AM	#4
JakeB. Photography Pundit Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Bradenton, FL Posts: 4,265	werd, thanks. __________________ JD Fine Art Phototgraphy My Flickr

08-28-2008, 07:51 PM	#5
JakeB. Photography Pundit Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Bradenton, FL Posts: 4,265	This is actually an older wedding, but I still like these images... __________________ JD Fine Art Phototgraphy My Flickr

08-29-2008, 09:57 AM	#6
KOREAN is hella epic Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 4,847	Re: (JakeB.) I like the first photo but I'm having a hard time putting my thoughts in words. All I can say is that the picture will surely bring them good memories The second picture is my personal favorite out of the three you just posted. Although the subjects are (purposely) underexposed, I can really feel the sense of celebration. The sky looks like an oil painting and I like it. I'm not sure if that's my laptop, Photobucket or both, but it works for me. This is probably just me but in the third photo my eyes like to shift towards the upper right hand corner, particularly near the woman's face. And if you want me to get picky, I think I see dust on the man's jacket. __________________ flickr

08-31-2008, 10:53 PM	#7
JakeB. Photography Pundit Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Bradenton, FL Posts: 4,265	Thanks for taking the time Korean... here are a few from Rosemarie & Larry's wedding. Man, I really need to pick some ceremony shots, huh? __________________ JD Fine Art Phototgraphy My Flickr

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